You need to make sure the numbers are right in the middle whether your shooting with 12 or 16 exposures. It's harder shooting with 16 because you sometimes WILL overlap even if you follow that rule. But when you shoot with 12. It's much easier.As for the blurriness, do you have pictures of things to focus on on your holga lens? There should be a mountain, a group of people and a small group of people... Do u not use those?
These may not be exactly what you had intended, but the top one is a lovely, little abstract image, and I like it a lot.
Elise, you make it sounds so easy! :) I didn't use the icons for the first role I did, but I did use it for this one...lame. I don't know what my problem is. Sheesh!
I dig that second photo.